2020年中考书面表达热点话题专题

情感态度

【考点解析】

表达情感、表明态度是对中学生的一项重要要求,也是中考常考的热点话题。研究近5年全国中考书面表达试题可以发现,情感态度话题的考查几率很大, 。此话题范围比较广泛,主要从以下几方面进行设题:1.情感表达,如感恩他人、表达爱和幸福;2.生活态度,如诚信、宽容、分享;3.励志激励,如学会自立自强;4.应对烦恼、困惑,如学会解决问题、自我减压等。

2020春节由于疫情当前，今年的寒假显得格外的长。孩子在家经常与父母亲争吵，社会新闻对这方面的报道也非常多，如何缓解孩子与父母的情感矛盾也是我们今年要关注的考点之一。

下面以往年的中考真题为例来讲解

【中考真题】

Writing 1

（2019年河北省）文明礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。请根据下面的提示和要求，以 “When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。

提示:1) When should we say “thank you” at home?

2) When are we supposed to say “thank you” at school?

3) ...

要求:1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。

2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

3) 词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

参考词汇:wash, encourage, open

When to Say Thank You

It’s polite to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us.

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Writing 2

当今社会,很多家庭对孩子过分溺爱,导致当他们面对问题时手足无措。因此对孩子们来说,学会自立相当重要。请根据以上所述,结合表格所提供的图片及文字信息,以"Learn to Be Independent"为题写一篇100词左右的短文。

要求:1.短文须包含所有信息,语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥;

2.题目与开头已给出,不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇:make decisions; depend on; look after; on the one hand...on the other hand...

Learn to Be Independent

Nowadays, many children are treated as "little emperors" at home.

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Writing 3

(2019年湖南长沙).假如你是李华，你们班输了上周的篮球赛。Henry认为是他未能投进最后一球所造成的，有的队友也因此而责怪他。请你写一封英文邮件安慰他，谈谈你对此事的看法，并就如何取得队友的理解提出建议。

要求：

（1）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。

Dear Henry,

I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game…

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Writing 4

每个人在自己的成长过程中都有自己的烦恼，都有自己的成长体验，而青少年面临越来越多的烦恼，主要体现在精神压力太大．请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文．

要点提示：

1）导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因：

①学业    ②与他人相处

2）减少压力的措施：

①积极参加课外活动   ②多与他人交流沟通

3）简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法．（至少一点）

注意：

1）文章开头已给出，不计入总词数.

2）文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯.

3）不可逐词翻译，应有独自的见解并适当发挥.

4）文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名.

    We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writing 5

[2019南平质检]母亲节即将到来,假如你是李华,请根据以下内容提示,写一篇80词左右的感恩信,感谢母亲给予你生命,呵护你健康成长,让母亲感受到你真挚的爱。

注意:(1)文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;

(2)文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。

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【参考答案】

Writing 1

【写作解析】看完题目后,同学们应首先明确以下问题:本篇主题是When to Say Thank You体裁是记叙文。描述他人时用第三人称,表述自己的观点时用第一人称。表达情感态度,时态以一般现在时为主。可以采用三段式作文。第一段引入主题。第二段举出一些例子说明什么时候要说谢谢, 第三段总结全文，提出倡议。下面提供一篇参考范文

【参考范文】

When to Say Thank You

It’s polite for us to say “thank you” when others help us or say something kind to us. Being polite is a good tradition in our country. Nobody likes a person who is impolite.It’s important for us to be polite.

We should say “thank you” to parents when they cook for us.We should say “thank you” when they wash clothes for us.We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out questions ,we should say “thank you” to them. When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us,we should say “thank you”.When someone open the door for us,we should say “thank you”. We should say “thank you” as often as possible.

If everyone is polite to others,the world will be more and more beautiful.

Writing 2

【写作解析】看完题目后,同学们应首先明确以下问题:本篇主题是Learn to Be Independent。本文属于图片和提纲相结合的议论文。描述他人时用第三人称,表述自己的观点时用第一人称。表达情感态度,时态以一般现在时为主。本题提供了两幅图,一幅是父母包办一切,另一幅是孩子遇到问题不知道怎么办。表格中分别针对家长和孩子给出了不同的建议。鉴于以上分析,我们可以把作文分为四段:第一段,描述图片展示的社会现象;第二段,针对父母提出建议;第三段,针对孩子发表看法;第四段,总结全文。像这种图片和表格结合的作文,同学们要认真审题,注意不要遗漏要点。下面提供一篇参考范文

【参考范文】

Learn to Be Independent

Nowadays, many children are treated as "little emperors" at home. Parents show so much love to their children that when they face problems, they don’t know what to do. So it’s important for children to learn to be independent.

In my opinion, parents should believe in their children and never do everything for them. It’s necessary to give children proper advice and more chances to make their own decisions.

As for children, they shouldn’t depend on their parents too much. On the one hand, they should learn to do chores. It helps to develop their independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. On the other hand, they ought to face difficulties bravely and try to solve them. Besides, they had better learn to never give up.

In a word, the earlier children learn to be independent, the better it is for their future.

Writing 3

【写作解析】本篇主题及题材是一篇安慰信，人称应以第二人称为主，根据要求，本篇文章可以由三段组成，第一段描述理解的心情并表示安慰，第二段分析一下失败的原因，第三段提出一些建议，鼓励对方下次继续努力，表达一定回成功的信心，下面提供一篇参考范文

【参考范文】

Dear Henry,

I learned that you are feeling sorry and upset because of losing the basketball game. It's not easy being in your situation, and it's normal to have these feelings. Anyway, don't be too hard on yourself.

You know, basketball is about team effort. It's never just one person's fault. What matters is that you should learn from the games as well as your mistakes. Besides, you need to think about how you can do better next time.

As a whole, teammates should support and believe in each other. Why don't you sit down and communicate with them? And you could promise that you will spare no efforts to better your skills. If all of you pull together, you're sure to win the next one.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Writing4

【写作解析】本篇作文主题是青少年烦恼，体裁是议论文，本篇是典型的议论文三段论，第一段描述青少年压力的主要原因，第二段描述缓解压力的措施，第三段谈一谈对压力的看法，下面提供一篇参考范文

【参考范文】

    We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up. The main reason for pressure is schoolwork and getting along with others. Students have been competing with each other since they were very young， which brings them too much pressure. Some students don't know how to get along well with others. They feel lonely. This can also bring them pressure and worries. I'll give you some ways to relieve pressure.

    First of all, you need to take part in all kinds of class activities， such as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions. In addition, you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible.

    In my opinion, pressure is not a bad thing. Proper pressure is beneficial to our growth and development. If a person doesn't have pressure, he will become lazy easily. We should learn to face pressure in our life.

Writing 5

【写作解析】本篇作文是一封对母亲表示感谢的感谢信，根据提示可以描述母亲对自己的照顾，以日常一些具体的例子来表现，母亲对自己的影响，可以是母亲教会我勇敢，教会我耐心对待人事，帮助我养成好习惯等等，下面提供一篇参考范文

【参考范文】

Dear Mom,

Mother’s Day is coming. I would like to say "Happy Mother’s Day" in this letter. You give me life and take good care of me. Thanks for preparing breakfast for me in the early morning.You took me to the hospital when I was sick. 

You teach me to be brave. When I have problems with my study and life,you are patient to encourage me.Also,I develop the good habit of learning with your help. 

Yours,

Li Hua

【结合时事，中考连接】

2020春节由于疫情当前，今年的寒假显得格外的长。你的好朋友Lin Lin在家经常与父母亲争吵，与同学的交往中也遇到了烦恼，他写邮件向你寻求帮助。请你以李华的身份给他写一封邮件——提出你的一些建议。

建议内容包括：遇到问题多倾诉，多与他人分享情绪，尊重他人，与人为善，诚实守信……

要求：l．词数60-80，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数；

2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

3．文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

参考词汇: share solve respect friendly be honest to

Dear Tony,

I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with your parents and classmates: I'm glad to help you.

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I hope everything will go well with you soon.

yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Lin Lin,

I'm sorry to hear that you have problems with classmates. I'm glad to help you. Here are some suggestions for you.

First, when you have difficulties, you should talk to your parents, your teachers or your friends and share your sadness and happiness with them. They will help you solve the problem.

Second, when you get along with your friends, you are supposed to respect them.

Third, you should be friendly to people around you. You can help each other.

Last but not least, you have to be honest to your friends. Then you will make more friends.

I hope everything will go well with you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua