雅思小作文高分模版

小作文结构

开头段 1-2句 转述原题

主体段1 1+X句 每个主体段第一句话概括本段，X句介绍数字

…

主体段N

结尾段 1-2句 第一句介绍总数total（如果没有就不写），第二句作结论

开头段

时态：一般现在时

替换词

proportion/ percentage information/ data number/ figures

family/ household males/ men females/ women

influence/ affect(v.) effect(n.) categories/ kinds/ types demand/ need

subway/ underground railway store/ shop university/ college

show/ describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ summarize/ indicate

国家的替换（如美国，英国等）

主体段

时态：由题目的时间决定

1. 数据按顺序介绍，不要跳跃

2. 4类关键数据：maximum最大值，minimum最小值，trend变化趋势，intersection交叉点（线图）

第一句，由图可见：

As can be seen from the table that…

It can be seen from the table that…

We can see from the table that…

According to the xx chart, …

It is interesting to note that…

Noticeably, (Interestingly)

第二句，具体来说：

To be more specific, … = more specifically

To be more exact, … = more exactly

替换词

上升

increased/ an increase rose/ a rise

急剧上升

rocketed (boomed) a rocket (a boom)

下降

dropped/ a drop decreased/ a decrease reduced / a reduction

急剧下降

slumped a slump

持平

stabilized remained / maintained / stayed stable / constant / steady

波动

fluctuated a fluctuation

最高点

peaked at reached the highest point at (as high as)

最低点

reached the bottom at

速度快/慢

rapid rapidly/ slow slowly

幅度大/小

significant significantly/ gradual gradually/ steady steadily/ slight slightly

大约：about/ around/approximately / just over/ just under

到达某个数量

reached/ stood at / arrived at

预期值（将来时间必须用这个写）

A is expected/ predicted / estimated / projected to reach …

分别

respectively

占比

accounted for/ made up/ represented the percentage of / was responsible for / provided

一些例句：

As can be seen from the graph, the number of … fluctuated during the period of … .

As can be seen from the graph, there was a slight rise in the number of *** from *** to ***

The period between *** and *** experienced a slight rise of …, with the number reaching ***.

It can be seen from the chart that *** accounted for the greatest proportion of ***

As for other categories, …

After that, an opposite trend occurred.

The highest … was A, followed by…

结尾段

Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the table that …

流程图

The process diagram illustrates in *** stages how …

由图可见

In the first stage(picture, period), … / Initially,

In the next step, …

After that(Next/ Then), …

Finally, … (the whole cycle starts over again.)

追加描述

at this stage/ at this point/ as the diagram shows

Therefore, the process diagram clearly shows that …

雅思大作文高分模版 – (1)

立场类文章

开头段

1. As the world continues to increase in complexity, ** (点题目的范围，比如education, crime, environmental

preservation等) has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.

2. When it comes to whether … (这句从句一定要写对，就是点题) , people hold conflicting opinions.

3. Personally, I strongly think that …

第二段 (你反对的那一方的有道理的部分。一般1-2个观点)

双边结合：On the one hand, there is no doubt that sth. has certain advantages (disadvantages).

只选择一边立场：One’s first inclination might be to argue that sth. has certain advantages (disadvantages).

第一个观点To begin with, … . 第二个观点Moreover, … .

论据部分可能的连接词：

as a result/ to be more specific/ in other words/ for instance

第三段 (你支持的那一方的观点，一般2-3个观点)

双边结合：On the other hand, we should not ignore the disadvantages it may bring along.

只选择一边立场：A quick look at the following facts, however, may show us a different picture.

连接词注意不要重复即可，如on top of that / besides / apart from

结尾段 （此类文章结尾必须要写）(仅以抽烟好不好为例)

只选择一边立场：Overall, despite the advantages smoking may bring, I think it has more disadvantages in terms of individual health and other aspects. Therefore, people should not be encouraged to take up smoking.

如果为双边结合的，结尾可用not only, but also 连接

如果支持那方有新观点，也可以放在结尾段。

雅思大作文高分模版 – (2)

解决问题类文章

开头段

As the world continues to increase in complexity, **（点题）has triggered a wide public concern and discussion.

New solutions to this problem are being proposed, trialed and implemented with ever increasing speed.

This essay aims to analyze the reasons for and potential influences(effects) brought by this problem and tries to give some possible solutions. 一定要看清楚题目问了哪几个问题，cause, effect, solution不一定都问的。

第二段

The causes of the problem facing the world are diverse.

第三段

Obviously, the situation has had various influences (consequences) on our society, (both positive and negative ones). 如果没有好的影响，逗号后面就写mostly negative ones.

第四段

Considering these causes, actions should be taken in several fields.

(The role of governments in environmental management is difficult but inescapable.) 这句话很好，但不适用所有的题目。

结尾段 (可以不写) 以下两种写法根据题目任选一种

1. In conclusion, I think there are many reasons why …, and corresponding measures should be taken. Only by

concerted efforts of governments and individuals, can this demanding challenge be addressed.

2. Progress is being made. The problem, though, remains the same. Will the change come quickly enough?