英语六级写作必背范文20篇

范文赏析(一)

　　 View on Fake Commodities

　　1. 假冒伪劣商品的危害。

　　2. 怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。

　　My View on Fake Commodities

　　Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market. Wherever you are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them. In other words, it is highly probable that you have bought some of those fake goods or products of inferior quality.

　　Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market. On the other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people’s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust.

　　Then, what should be done to do away with fake commodities To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies. Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of their intellectual property right. Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones. In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake commodities.

　　 in the Ownership of Houses

　　要求：1、根据上图描述该市住房产权的变化;

　　2、分析产生这些变化的原因;

　　3、说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响。

　　Changes in the Ownership of Houses

　　As is shown in the chart, great changes have taken place in the ownership of houses in the city. There has been a steady decline in the percentage of state-owned houses from 75 in 1990 to 20 in 2000. On the contrary, the percentage of private houses has been on the rise.

　　Several factors may account for the trend. For one thing, owing to the policy of reform and opening to the outside world, the past decade witnessed significant improvement in people’s standard of living. In other words, they have had the means to purchase houses of their own. For another, people’s ideas about consumption have undergone some radical changes. In the past, they were reluctant to spend, but now they are willing to buy. Anyway, it is much more comfortable to dwell in a house of one’s own.

　　These changes in the ownership have already had a positive effect on both individuals and society. Individuals, young people in particular, will be motivated to work harder to purchase a nest of their own. As a result, the housing industry will be boosted and more revenues will be raised to cover other sectors of our national economy.

　　范文欣赏(二)

　　议论型作文

　　1. Should College Students Live on Campus

　　a. 有些人喜欢住在学校的宿舍，因为……

　　b. 有些人喜欢住在校外，因为……

　　c. 我的看法

　　There are an increasing number of students who choose to live off campus. Parents and university administrations understandably reacted differently. They voiced concerns about security and the threat of off-campus lifestyles getting out of control. However, college students have their own reasons for their choices.

　　Some students prefer to live on campus for the following reasons. First, campus residents are closer to classes, the library, and other resources, so they are more likely to succeed in college and complete their bachelor’s degree in four years. Furthermore, Living in a dorm is a great opportunity to meet all kinds of new people and develop relationships with them, so students living on campus are more sociable. Last but not the least, living on campus is cheaper and more convenient. Often times, off-campus housing is more expensive than on-campus housing and while living on campus, you don’t have to worry about monthly rent payments and utility bills.

　　Some others choose to live off campus because they believe living off campus they are more independent, with more privacy and a lot more quiet time. Living off campus gives them freedom from those dorm rules and allow them to set their own. The extra space also means that one can probably find a quiet place to study in the convenience of his own home.

　　As for me, I’m a faithful supporter of the former group because I, living on campus myself, have witnessed and enjoyed all the convenience and happiness of doing so. To me, living on campus undoubtedly adds an important element to the complete college experience.

2. Pursuit of A Master’s Degree

　　a. 根据下图描述某校毕业生毕业意向的变化 b. 分析选择读研的毕业生数目增加的原因

　　c. 说明选择读研对个人和社会产生的影响

　　It is illustrated in the pie charts that graduates’ choices after graduation have experienced much change. The number of students choosing to pursue a master’s degree and study abroad grows several times over the decade.

　　The reasons of the increasing number of students pursuing a master’s degree are as follows. First, with the number of college graduates growing each year, the situation in the job market is getting tighter and tighter. The public awareness of the situation has created a surge of interest in seeking a master’s degree. Secondly, many cross-national companies set a much higher standard for new recruits than ever. It seems that the higher education you have, the higher salary you may receive.

　　Choosing to study for master’s degree will benefit the individuals and the whole society as well. The quality of Chinese intellectuals will be considerably enhanced, which in turn will boost the progress of the whole society.

　　3 Directions: Suppose you are Wei Qiang and you will graduate from university. Write a letter of inquiry to the Department of Physics, University of Wisconsin, asking for admission as a graduate student.

　　July, 2007

　　Dear Sirs,

　　I am very interested in undertaking graduate work in your university. I have read research papers by two of your professors Dr. Thomas Bay and Mr. Sherry Haily. I’d like to study under their guidance.

　　In September of 2003 I was enrolled in the Computer School of the XYZ University as a computer major. Throughout the four years of study, I take this field as one of great potentials for my country. I feel the need to study further in order to develop well in this area.

　　I would appreciate receiving your materials such as departmental brochure or pamphlet, and a university catalog or bulletin.

　　Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your reply.

　　Respectfully yours,

　　Wei Qiang

　　4. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Say “Thank You” to Parents. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

　　1. 很多的大学生从未跟父母道过谢 2. 请说明原因 3. 你的建议

　　According to a recent survey involving over 3000 undergraduates, 35% of university students have never said “Thank you” to their parents. Their parents have done all they could to bring them up in the past score of years, but have never been rewarded with gratitude.

　　The subjects claim such reasons as follows. First and foremost, a quarter of the interviewed students regard it as parents’ duty to support them spiritually and financially. And it is not necessary to express appreciation to their parents. However, the majority of youngsters are aware of their parents’ tender love but are not accustomed to saying “Thank you”. Some even find a generation gap between themselves and their parents, thus feeling reluctant to express their affection for their parents.

　　In my opinion, extending thankfulness to our parents is a way of respecting them and their love. We should express our feelings directly and bravely, but what’s more important is, we should do all that we can to reward them.

　　范文欣赏(三)

　　(一)Fire Prevention on Campus

　　1. 前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失

　　2. 分析火灾发生的原因

　　3. 作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生

　　●审题概述●

　　这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述;第二段，说明原因;第三段，详细论述措施。

【范文】

Fire Prevention on Campus 　　

　　People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported – houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “What on earth results in these repeated tragedies”

　　A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.

　　Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　概述并引入下文

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies常可作为过渡句，引出下文

　　(2)注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如are alarmed by，were reported，were burned down，were damaged，Faced with。

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂，

　　◇语言点提示：

　　electric water-heaters电热水器

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first, second, lastly。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　take precautions采取预防措施

　　fire extinguisher灭火器

　　(二)Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

　　1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生

　　2. 物品被盗的原因

　　3. 学生如何加强防盗意识

●审题概述●

　　这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】

Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts 　　

　　“If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

　　What makes students the easy targets The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.

　　In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况

　　◇语言点提示：

　　it seems that此句型表示一种可能性

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　说明被盗原因

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)What makes students the easy targets此句引出下文

　　(2)anti-theft alertness防盗意识

　　(3)lack of alertness缺乏警惕

　　(4)light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　阐述如何加强防盗意识

　　◇语言点提示：

　　注意关联词语in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。

　　(三)How Will Our Life Go on without Internet

　　1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活

　　2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行

　　3. 你对网络依赖症的看法

● 审题概述●

　　本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。

　　【范文】1：

How Will Our Life Go on without Internet 　　

　　If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.

　　Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.

　　True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　has drawn…, realized, and provided此为谓语连动式的运用。

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　resort to借助、诉诸、求助于

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)negative effects副作用、反面作用

　　(2)addicts成瘾者、依恋者

　　(3)fantasy world虚拟世界、虚幻世界

　　(4)pornography色情表演、色情作品

　　(5)fraud欺骗、诈骗

【范文】2：

　　As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.

　　For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.

　　As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”

　　(四)Craze for Civil Service Examinations

　　1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员

　　2. 引起此现象的原因

　　3. 你的看法

　　● 审题概述●

　　本文是一篇主要论述大学生报考公务员增多的原因和对此看法的文章。第一段，主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈你对此的观点。

　　【范文】

Craze for Civil Service Examinations 　　

　　Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.

　　In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.

　　Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.

　◇第一段思路点评：

　　第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　liberal arts majors文科专业学生

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)On the one hand…On the other起到衔接上文作用

　　(2)is attributable to归因于

　　(3)sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　beyond reproach无可厚非

　　(五)Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes

　　1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班

　　2. 有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要

　　3. 你的观点

　　● 审题概述●

　　这是一篇主要论述人们和你对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段，概述各种各样培

　　训班的状况。第二段，论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。

　　【范文】

Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes 　　

　　All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.

　　Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head.

As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起，第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)a great diversity of各种各样的

　　(2)mushrooming迅速扩散、增加

　　(3)language crash courses语言速成课程

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　先用一句对比式地摆出两种不同的观点，再分别详述他们的看法。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　注意连接词语while，The former，They，The latter group of people等的使用，强化了上下文之间的连贯性。

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　辩证地论述你对参加各类培训班的看法。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)as far as I am concerned我认为，就我而言

　　(2)counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的

　　(六)University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands

　　1. 现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌，用名牌

　　2. 你对这种现象的看法

　　● 审题概述●

　　这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，详述大学生热衷追求、使

　　用名牌的情形以及人们的看法。第二段，重点谈你对此的看法。

　　【范文】

　　University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands

“What perfumes are you wearing” “Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest release” “I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.” “I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along” Don’t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. “Keeping up with the Joneses” is their conviction – “If the Joneses have it, how could I have not”

　　About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.

　　However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. “The love of beauty is common to all,” goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn’t it

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　本段分为两个部分，即详细陈述大学生追求和使用名牌的情况，以及人们对此的看法。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)keeping up with the Joneses要在地位和物质上比得上周围的人

　　(2)conviction坚定的信仰、看法

　　(3)vanity and superficiality虚荣心和面子观(肤浅、表面、浅薄)

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　本段应辩证地分析大学生追求、使用名牌的现象，既有对此肯定的看法，也有否定的看法，即大学生在追求和使用名牌中汲取经验教训并学会管理。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)abide by the consequences自食其果

　　(2)ill-advised考虑不周的、不明智的

　　(3)in moderation适度、不过分

　　(七)Knowledge and Diploma

　　1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香

　　2. 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识

　　3. 你的观点

　　● 审题概述●

这是一篇论述高文凭与知识关系的文章。第一段，概述社会上文凭越高越吃香的看法。第二段，主要论述有些人文凭不等于知识的观点。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。

　　【范文】

Knowledge and Diploma 　　

　　It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.

　　On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.

　　So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　先陈述人们对高文凭高能力的看法，再点出这是一种社会现实。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　job candidate求职者、应聘者

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　详细论述文凭并不等于能力。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　Acknowledgment承认、致谢、感谢、答谢

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　使用一个长句阐述了你对文凭与知识辩证关系的认识。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)equate a diploma with knowledge 把文凭与知识划等号

　　(2)nothing but a proof of a short-term study只是短期学习的证明

　　(八)The Rise of Shanzhai Culture

　　1. 最近兴起了一股“山寨热”

　　2. 你如何看待山寨现象

　　● 审题概述●

　　本文是一篇论述山寨现象以及人们和你对此看法的文章。第一段，概述方兴未艾的山寨

　　热。第二段，阐述山寨产品的优势以及给人们带来的好处。第三段，论述人们和你对山寨现象的反对立场和观点，即山寨产品的非法性。

　　【范文】

The Rise of Shanzhai Culture 　　

　　The vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “shanzhai” the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.

　Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation – a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.

　　However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people’s risks.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　综述山寨热现象。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　…public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　主要阐述山寨产品的优势。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新

　　(2)respond to the market对市场做出反应

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌

　　(2)thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣

　　(3)legal loopholes法律漏洞(空子)

　　(4)Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下

　　(5)violating intellectual property rights违反知识产权

　　(6)evading taxes逃税

　　(7)plagiarism剽窃、抄袭

(九)It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy

　　1. 盗版软件比比皆是

　　2. 盗版软件猖獗的原因

　　3. 如何打击盗版软件

　　● 审题概述●

　　这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。第一段，概述中国

　　盗版软件泛滥的情况。第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。

　　【范文】

It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy 　　

　　China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere.

　　The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version

　　Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win situation. But how Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　the rampant practice of software piracy猖獗的盗版软件

　　◇第二段思路点评：

　　论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)downloads online 在线下载

　　(2)authentic copy正版

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。

◇语言点提示：

　　tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚

　　(十)Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students

　　1. 金融危机给各行各业都造成了一定影响

　　2. 金融危机对大学生造成何种影响

　　3. 作为大学生，应怎样应对这种影响

　　● 审题概述●

　　这是一篇主要论述金融危机与大学生关系的文章。第一段，概述金融危机给世界造成的影响。第二段，论述金融危机给大学生带来的就业、经济等影响。第三段，阐述大学生面对金融危机带来的影响应提高专业技能等。

　　【范文】

Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students 　　

　　Since the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into a severe recession. It’s hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, millions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life.

　　College students inevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On top of that, internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes next Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue their studies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some malicious businesspeople, or even criminal gang.

　　In response to these threats, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since we definitely will be facing a competitive job market, it’s crucial that we submit high quality resumes. Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies. Even do better, master more relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore, apply for scholarships and grants, as these are still available and we don’t have to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust our instinct – there’s no free lunch in this world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is a sure trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves.

　　◇第一段思路点评：

　　概述金融危机给各行各业造成的影响。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)severe recession严重衰退

　　(2)devastating effects毁灭性的后果

　　(3)go bankrupt破产

　　(4)high-return investment bubbles高回报投资泡沫

　　(5)retrieved追回、挽回

◇第二段思路点评：

　　主要论述金融危机给大学生带来影响。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　(1)slump 经济萧条、不景气、经济衰退

　　(2)internships 实习

　　(3)fall victim to 被降服、屈服于

　　(4)malicious恶毒的、恶意的

　　◇第三段思路点评：

　　阐述大学生如何应对金融危机的影响。

　　◇语言点提示：

　　注意since, therefore, furthermore等关联词的使用，使句间关系更加紧密。

　　冲刺作文写作纲要：七类段落

　　1. 记叙一件事 When and where who did what

　　A few days ago, I bought an English-Chinese dictionary at Xinhua bookstore in the downtown area of Xinjiekou. When I went back to look up some new words in the dictionary, I found pages 101 to 150 were missing. So on that afternoon, I returned to the bookstore where I had purchased it and filed a complaint directly to the general manager about the problem.

　　一次活动的安排，旅游的行程都可以套用记叙文模式，注意时间的推进，可用明确的时间几点几分，也可用大致的时间如early in the morning/at noon/in the afternoon/evening/at night, 还可用First…Then…At last…如果是发生过的事，一定要用一般过去时，如果是活动安排，须用将来时。

　　2. 描述一个社会现象，如不诚实、盗版、校园浪费等等，要充分利用例证

　　Dishonesty has been prevalent in our society in recent years. For example, many students cheat to obtain high scores on various exams such as CET for Band 4 or 6. Or businesses and companies produce fake goods or products of inferior quality to reap illegal profits. What is worse, some government officials and corporate leaders are involved in criminal cases of bribery and corruption, abusing the power in their hands. The flood of dishonest phenomena has brought about a harmful effect on our society.

　　将例子说清楚，尽量用完整句。

　　3. 分析现象的成因，至少要列出两个方面的原因：学生选择任课老师时所考虑的因素、住房产权变化的原因、国人喜欢过西方节日的原因，可用列举法。另外，后果或影响类的段落可用同样的方式处理。

　　The popularity of Western festivals in China may be attributed to several factors. On one hand, with China’s opening up to the outside world, many people, young people in particular, have been exposed to foreign cultures, an important part of which are holidays and festivals. On the other hand, business people take advantage of the occasion of celebrating western festivals to promote sales of their products to make much more money than usual. A case in point is Christmas shopping every year.

　　There are several factors/reasons for …First of all(For one thing)…Secondly(For another)…Lastly(In addition)

　　4. 提出解决问题的方案，要注意照顾到问题所涉及的方方面面：应该怎么做

　　To make good food and water supplies even better, the Government needs to tighten its regulatory standards, stiffen its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies. The food industry should modify some long accepted practices or turn to less hazardous alternatives. Perhaps most important, consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to handle and cook food properly. The problems that need to be tackled exist all along the food supply chain, from fields to processing plants to kitchens.

在上面这段关于食品、饮用水安全的文章中，提到了政府、相关产业以及消费者三个方面，而谓语动词分别用了need to do sth./will have to do a better job of doing sth.可以借鉴，此外还可 It is necessary/imperative/important for sb. to do sth.did 等句型。

　　5. 描述图表/变化/趋势，一定要将变化清楚地表达出来，考过的作文有产权变化、出国旅游人数的增加、饮食结构的变化等。

　　As is shown in the chart/diagram/picture, there has been a slow/slight/steady (rapid/tremendous/dramatic) increase/rise (decrease/fall/drop) in the number of tourists traveling abroad in the past decade/from 1995 to 2005. In 1995, only about 10,000 people in X city went to foreign countries. However,　　From the table/graph/statistics it can be seen/concluded/estimated that the consumption of dairy products and eggs has been/is on the rise. On the contrary/By contrast, the consumption of rice and flour has been/is on the fall/decline. In other words, the diet of urban residents is more balanced and nutritious than ever before.

　　Those who choose to study overseas account for X percent of the total of high school graduates.

　　另外，注意增加/减少百分之几，英文表达是increase/decrease by X percent, 介词by 不可或缺。

　　6. 观点阐述属于议论文写作，通常以介词On或情态动词should 的题目出现，而在给出的提纲中，则通常出现“有些人认为”、“在我看来”或“你的看法”这些词语，要求考生就某个问题发表见解，阐明观点。考生在论证的过程中，要区分论点和论据，注意逻辑性。近两年的作文题有一种复归趋势，考生要特别注意。

　　As the inheritor and distributor of our civilization, we college students should(观点)be fully aware the important role played by the classics in broadening our horizon and shaping our world outlook. Therefore(因果), we should start reading the repertoire of the classics which the greatest minds of all ages have left behind so that(目的) we can have a correct perspective on the world and understand the true meaning of life. In one word(总结), it is imperative for us to attach great importance to the reading of the classics.

　　还可用条件、比较、对比、正反论述、例证、解释等方式展开段落。

　　Some suggest/argue that the Spring Festival Gala on CCTV should be canceled because the viewers have had a lot of other means of relaxation which are more colorful and full of more fun. For example, they can take advantage of the holiday to go traveling to some scenic or historic resorts together with the family.

　　As we all know, it pays to be honest. If we are honest with others, we will win trust and respect from them. But if we deceive others for our own benefits, we will be found out sooner or later and lose our credit and trustworthiness, thereby incurring disrepute and disgrace in the long run.

　　7. 应用文写作：近些年考过的题目有书信、导游词、倡议书、招募书、竞选演说等等，非常灵活，不一而足。实际上，应用文并不难写，只要注意相对固定的格式和一些常用的套话即可。如07年6月份的四级题Welcome to our Club，第一段说明社团的活动内容，第二段列出参加社团的好处有哪些，第三段说明加入社团的方式，不难看出主体上这是一篇说明文。再如05年六级的作文题Help Needed要求简单介绍病人的病情和家境、目前所面临的困难，给出捐助的联系方式，几乎与前者如出一辙。考生只要能熟练掌握上面所列出的六种展开段落的方式，就可以决战考场、应付如裕!