Proof Reading 导学案 2012-11-14

一、课前预习：短文改错

短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有三处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词

2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Passage 1

I went for fishing with my father last Sunday. We started at daybreak. Before long we come to a stream with clean water, which we could see fish swimming. It was a well place for fishing.

After the few minutes’ preparation, we sat down and began fishing. An hour passed, and I didn’t get a single fish. I felt very disappointing. I often lifted the fishing rod, because I almost lost my patience. On the other side of the stream, my father had got lots fish. I went up to him and asked for some advices. With his help, he got some fish , too. How happy I was!

二、 小组探究:

根据答题过程讨论以下问题：

1.短文考点是什么（改错改什么）？ 2技巧在哪（怎样找错）？

从词性角度：________ _________ __________ ____________ ____________ ___________

__________ ____________

从语法角度：___________________________________________________________________

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三、挑战高考短文改错

Passage 2 (2011 陕西)

Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I come across a group of people who was making a new film with one of my favorite actor. I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, but I rushed back home to get it. Unfortunate, by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen anywhere. I was disappointing and about to leave while he walked out a building . He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck---not only did I have my photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt!

四、尝试命题；

Today I want to tell you a story about one of my classmates, who is always good at both work and study.

Regarding her as a top student in my class, all the teachers and classmates like her very much . In my mind, she is fantastic. One day she felt disappointed because she didn’t do well in an English quiz. I explained to her that no one could be perfect. In fact we can never avoid mistakes. It’s impossible for anyone to be a perfect person. However successful we are, we still have some shortcomings. I suggest she should change her attitude and be positive.

五、课后总结和反思

六、强化训练（课后作业）

Passage 3（2012 辽宁）

Dear Diana,

Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result ,there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile . In the end, we drove to a service station and wait there unless the road was clear . In the car park there Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry . They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our town way to home.

Much love,

Fiona