Section Ⅴ Writing— 想象类作文

一、基本结构

1．确定主题，融合各种科幻形象的特点，发挥自己的想象力，创造一个生动的文章角色；

2．构思情节，想象类作文的命题方式多是给出简单要点或图表等，要求学生在此基础拼十年寒窗挑灯苦读不畏难；携双亲期盼背水勇战定夺魁。如果你希望成功，以恒心为良友，以经验为参谋，以小心为兄弟，以希望为哨兵。

上进行合理想象。

二、增分佳句

1．Perhaps some people will go to the moon for their holiday, and some scientists will live under the sea.

或许有些人会去月球度假，而一些科学家会生活在海底。

2．We can have a medical examination or do some shopping with the help of the videophone.

我们能够在视频电话的帮助下进行医疗检查或购物。

3．Every day we can ask the robot to do the housework, shopping and so on.

每天我们可以让机器人做家务、购物等工作。

4．If we can only get 3 hours of sleep a day, we will need a sleeping machine.

如果我们一天只睡三个小时，我们需要一个睡眠机器。

5．This kind of machine is programmed and controlled by a computer. Once you press the button it will start washing dishes for you.

这种机器是由电脑控制的，只要你按下按钮，它就开始清洗碗碟了。

[题目要求]

社会发展到了2080年，照顾老年人成了一个突出的社会问题。你公司顺应社会需求适时推出了家用机器人。该机器人的主要功能有：

1．可以在固定的时间做饭，做饭时间可以根据个人需要进行调整；

2．可以陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动等；

3．及时处理突发事件，例如在老人突然病倒时及时拨打急救电话等。

请你根据以上内容写一篇发言稿，在新闻发布会上向大家推荐你公司的这一新产品。

第一步：审题构思很关键

一、审题

1．确定体裁：本文为想象类作文；

2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第一人称和第三人称；

3．确定时态：主要使用一般将来时和一般现在时。

二、构思

第一部分，称呼，该篇文章为想象类作文中的演讲稿，故文章开头要有恰当的称呼。

第二部分，介绍该款机器人的特点。

第三部分，发出呼吁。

第二步：核心词汇想周全

1．accompany　　　　　　　　　　陪伴；陪同

2．be_designed_to 专门为……设计

3．at_a_fixed_time 在固定时间

4．adjust 调整

5．emergency 紧急情况

6．fall_ill 生病

7．call_doctors_for_help 向医生求助

8．own 拥有

第三步：由词扩句雏形现

1．众所周知，随着经济的发展，人们不得不要面对各种不同的压力。

As_is_known_to us all, with the development of economy，people have to face various pressures.

2．他们没有足够的时间在家中陪伴老人，这已经成了一个突出的社会问题。

They could not accompany the old people in their family because they don't have enough time, and this has become a prominent social problem.

3．为了解决这个问题，我们公司推出了这款家用机器人，它是专门为照顾老年人而设计的。

To_solve_this_problem,_our company put out the household robot, which is_designed_to take care of old people.

4．它还可以陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动等。

It can also accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise.

第四步：句式升级造亮点

1．用it作形式主语的主语从句改写句1

It_is_known_to_us_all_that_people_have_to_face_various_pressures_as_a_result_of_the_development_of_economy.

2．用不定式短语作目的状语、which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句2

They_don't_have_enough_time_to_accompany_the_old_people_in_their_family,_which_has_become_a_prominent_social_problem.

3．用过去分词短语作后置定语改写句3

To_solve_this_problem,_our_company_put_out_the_household_robot_designed_to_take_care_of_old_people.

第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

Ladies and gentlemen，

Thank you for attending our company's news conference. It is known to us all that people have to face various pressures as a result of the development of economy. They don't have enough time to accompany the old people in their family, which has become a prominent social problem. To solve this problem, our company put out the household robot designed to take care of old people. It can cook meals at a fixed time which can be adjusted according to individual needs and it can also accompany old people in having a chat, playing chess and doing exercise. Moreover, it can deal with emergencies, for example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors for help.

It would be a great help for you if you own such a robot.

Thank you.