英文论文审稿意见汇总

以下12点无轻重主次之分。每一点内容由总结性标题和代表性审稿人意见构成。

1、目标和结果不清晰。

It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with

expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English

grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the

study are clear to the reader.

2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。

◆ In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical me

thods used in the study.

◆ Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various

experiments

should be provided.

3、对于研究设计的rationale:

Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.

4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨：

The conclusions are overstated. For example, the study did not show

if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer

formulation.

5、对hypothesis的清晰界定：

A hypothesis needs to be presented。

6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念：

What was the rationale for the film/SBF volume ratio?

7、对研究问题的定义：

Try to set the problem discussed in this paper in more clear,

write one section to define the problem

8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literature review:

The topic is novel but the application proposed is not so novel.

9、对claim,如A＞B的证明，verification:

There is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known

work, so it is impossible to judge whether the algorithm is an improvement on

previous work.

：题问度谨严、10．

MNQ is easier than the primitive PNQS, how to prove that.

11、格式（重视程度）：

◆ In addition, the list of references is not in our style. It is close but not

completely correct. I have attached a pdf file with Instructions for Authors

which shows examples.

◆ Before submitting a revision be sure that your material is properly prepared

and formatted. If you are unsure, please consult the formatting nstructions to

authors that are given under the Instructions and Forms button in he upper

right-hand corner of the screen.

12、语言问题（出现最多的问题）：

有关语言的审稿人意见：

◆ It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with

expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English

grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the

study are clear to the reader.

◆ The authors must have their work reviewed by a proper translation/reviewing

service before submission; only then can a proper review be performed. Most

sentences contain grammatical and/or spelling mistakes or are not complete

sentences.

◆ As presented, the writing is not acceptable for the journal. There are pro

blems with sentence structure, verb tense, and clause construction.

◆ The English of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission. We

str

ongly suggest that you obtain assistance from a colleague who is well-versed i

n English or whose native language is English.

◆ Please have someone competent in the English language and the subject

matte

r of your paper go over the paper and correct it. ?

◆ the quality of English needs improving.

来自编辑的鼓励：

Encouragement from reviewers:

◆ I would be very glad to re-review the paper in greater depth once it has be

en edited because the subject is interesting.

◆ There is continued interest in your manuscript titled …… which you subm

itted to the Journal of Biomedical Materials Research: Part B - Applied Biomat

erials.

◆ The Submission has been greatly improved and is worthy of publication.

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老外写的英文综述文章的审稿意见

Ms. Ref. No.: ******

Title: ******

Materials Science and Engineering

Dear Dr. ******,

Reviewers have now commented on your p

aper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript. If you

are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider

my decision.

For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below.

Reviewer #1: This work proposes an extensive review on micromulsion-based

methods for the synthesis of Ag nanoparticles. As such, the matter is of interest,

however the paper suffers for two serious limits:

1) the overall quality of the English language is rather poor;

2) some Figures must be selected from previous literature to discuss also the

synthesis of anisotropically shaped Ag nanoparticles (there are several

examples published), which has been largely overlooked throughout the

paper. ;

Once the above concerns are fully addressed, the manuscript could be accepted

for publication in this journal

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这是一篇全过程我均比较了解的投稿，稿件的内容我认为是相当不错的，中文版投稿于业内有较高影响的某核心期刊，并很快得到发表。其时我作为审稿人之一，除了提出一些修改建议外，还特建议了5篇应增加的参考文献，该文正式发表时共计有参考文献25篇。

作者或许看到审稿意见还不错，因此决意尝试向美国某学会主办的一份英文刊投“功底较好的中国人翻译，投稿后约文位一英后改。稿几经修和补充，请3周，便返回了三份审稿意见。

从英文刊的反馈意见看，这篇稿件中最严重的问题是文献综述和引用不够，其次是语言表达方面的欠缺，此外是论证过程和结果展示 方面的不足。形式

感想：一篇好的论文，从内容到形式都需要精雕细琢。

附1：中译审稿意见

审稿意见—1

(1) 英文表达太差，尽管意思大致能表达清楚，但文法错误太多。

(2) 文献综述较差，观点或论断应有文献支持。

(3) 论文读起来像是XXX的广告，不知道作者与XXX是否没有关联。

(4) 该模式的创新性并非如作者所述，目前有许多XX采取此模式（如美国地球物理学会），作者应详加调查并分析XXX运作模式的创新点。

(5) 该模式也不是作者所说的那样成功……(审稿人结合论文中的数据具体分析)

审稿意见—2

(1) 缺少直接相关的文献引用(如…)。

(2) 写作质量达不到美国学术期刊的标准。

审稿意见—3

(1) 作者应着重指出指出本人的贡献。

(2) 缺少支持作者发现的方法学分析。

(3) 需要采用表格和图件形式展示(数据)材料。

附2：英文审稿意见(略有删节)

Reviewer: 1．

There are many things wrong with this paper.

The English is very bad. Although the meaning is by and large

clear, not too many sentences are correct.

The literature review is poor. The paper is riddled with

assertions and claims that should be supported by references.

The paper reads as an advertisement for XXX. It is not clear that

the author is independent of XXX.

The AA model of XXX is not as innovative as the author claims.

There are now many XX that follow this model (American

Geophysical Union, for example), and the author should survey

these model to see which one first introduced the elements of

the XXX model.

The model is also not as successful as the author claims. ……

Overall, the presentation and the contents of the paper can only

mean that I reject that the paper be rejected.

Reviewer: 2

The are two major problems with this paper:

(1) It is missing the context of (and citations to) what is now

know as the wo-sided market literature including that directly

related to … (e.g. Braunstein, JASIS 1977; Economides &

Katsanakas, Mgt. Sci., 2006; McCabe & Snyder, B.E. J Econ

Analysis, 2007).

(2) The writing quality is not up to the standard of a US scholarly

journal.

Reviewer: 3

1. The author should accentuate his contributions in this

manuscript.

2. It lacks analytical methodologies to support author's

discoveries.

3. Description style material like this manuscript requires

structured tables & figures for better presentations.