Week 1--- 建议信

1、典型题例

Writing7(2017宁波)

三年的初中生活让你收获满满。校英语报邀你写一篇短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学或们的父母提一些建议。

请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象，阐述你的观点。

注意

(1)短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点，并适当发挥 (2)不得出现真实的人名和校名 (3)词数:80-100 4)短文首句仅供参考，不计人总词数

写作提示

1.本文使用一般现在时态 2覆盖答题要点。

3行为连贯，连接词使用恰当，指代清断。

参考范文:

Possible version I:

How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. Here I’d like to tell you something that will make your school life more comfortable and wonderful.

First of all, it is important for you to keep healthy, so don’t forget to exercise every day. Second, you'd better join clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. Third, you will be able to make great progress if you develop your study skills. Besides, there are many ways for you to lower your stress, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies.

I hope you will enjoy your school life and achieve your dreams.

Possible version 2:

How time flies! Now your children are students of Grade 9. Here I’d like to tell you something that will make their school life more wonderful.

First of all, it is important to encourage your children more so that they will be more confident. Second, please do not compare your children with others because if you push them too hard, they will feel stressed out. Third. the children should be allowed to make their own decisions. There is no need to get everything ready for them. Besides, being a good listener will

help you get along well with your children

I hope your children's dreams will come true with your help.

2、典型句型

【篇首句】说明写信目的。

1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.

很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题很正常。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。

2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.

我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。

3. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese and I will try to make some suggestions here

你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议,那么我就在这里给出一些建议。

4. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions for you.

很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议

5. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in middle school

很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在初中学好英语,我写信给你一些建议

【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。

1. I’d like to suggest that

我想要建议

2. In my opinion,

在我看来

3. If I were you, I would

如果我是你,我会

4. you'd better do./not do Why not do

你最好/最好不. 为什么不...

5.It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture. （In this way...）

在你来亲眼看到这些地地方之前,你有必要读一些关于这些地方的书。有了关于这些地方更多的知识,你你将会更好的理解中国的历史和文化。

6. First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can after class.

首先,你应该认真听老师讲课。上课做好笔记,以便下课后可以及时复习。

【篇尾句】 提出希望采纳建议,并祝福。

1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.

我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:有志者事竟成。

2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.

我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住:一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。

3. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see your improvement

无论如何,我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我我会非常高兴看到情况改善。

4. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do，good luck with your studies/work!

我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你決定做什么,祝你学习/工作好运。

5. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.

我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的,请告诉我